Reseach Paper

I have a biographical reseach paper due in two weeks. We have been given a list of women to choose from and I picked Eva Braun (aka Mrs. Hitler, she married hitler the day before the two killed themselves). It has to be in MLA format. I have some information and enough to write 6-8 pages. I still need some help. On a thesis statement and then for someone to check my work..IF anyone would please help, please email me at (edited) thanks so much.

Outline..some of it

A. Eva Braun had a normal childhood.

1. she was born 2/6/1912 to Fredrich and Franciska Braun.

2. her father was a school teacher at the Catholic school she and her two sisters (gretl and iise) attended.

3. she took dancing and music lessons. She enjoyed art and had the beauty of a "farmers daughter"

4.. went to school at Catholic women's institute for a year where she studied Economics and bookkepping.

B. Meeting Hitler

1. Eva Braun took a job with Heinrich Hoffman (the nazi party offical photographer) as a bookeeper and lab assistant.

2 In 1929 she met "Herr wolf" (adolf hitler's name for secuity reasons.

C. Hitler was at the time dating Geli Raubel

1. His half-sisters daughter....

and so it goes on..does this sound okay so far. does this sound like this is what I should do?