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Jobb Posted 21 years ago
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Rescue
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About 9:20AM December 21, Sanyi Police Sub-Station of Mengcheng Public Security Bureau recieved an order from 110 Command Center: A girl called Jiangxing, of Quizhou, who was traf***ed in to the area where the Sub-Station administers, asked for police to help. The policemen were immidiately out, investigating. After some efforts by all means, the police learned the specific place where the girl was traf***ed in and hid. To ensure a successful rescue, the policemen made a sophisticated plan. They explained that they wanted to ban manufacturing firecrackers, driving to Qianzhangzhuang of Sanyi Village, which is administered by the Sub-Station, and rescuing Miss Jiangxin.
About 9:20AM December 21, Sanyi Police Sub-Station of Mengcheng Public Security Bureau recieved an order from 110 Command Center: A girl called Jiangxing, of Quizhou, who was traf***ed in to the area where the Sub-Station administers, asked for police to help. The policemen were immidiately out, investigating. After some efforts by all means, the police learned the specific place where the girl was traf***ed in and hid. To ensure a successful rescue, the policemen made a sophisticated plan. They explained that they wanted to ban manufacturing firecrackers, driving to Qianzhangzhuang of Sanyi Village, which is administered by the Sub-Station, and rescuing Miss Jiangxin.
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First, I need to know what you mean by 'traffic', Jobb-- usually it refers to white slavery,prostitution or illegal drugs. What's the connection with pyrotechnics?
- First, I need to know what you mean by 'traffic', Jobb-- usually it refers to white slavery,prostitution or illegal drugs.
- What's the connection with pyrotechnics?
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First, I need to know what you mean by 'traffic', Jobb-- usually it refers to white slavery,prostitution or illegal drugs. What's the connection with pyrotechnics?
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See the headline of official document:
Decision of the Standing Committee of the NPC Regarding the Severe Punishment of Criminals Who Abduct and Traffic in or Kidnap Women or Children
"Traffic in or Kidnap Women or Children" = "Sell or Kidnap Women or Children"
Decision of the Standing Committee of the NPC Regarding the Severe Punishment of Criminals Who Abduct and Traffic in or Kidnap Women or Children
"Traffic in or Kidnap Women or Children" = "Sell or Kidnap Women or Children"
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No, no 'Chinglish'-- I just didn't know precisely which crime had been committed-- the firecrackers section confused me (I have simplified it considerably below):
At about 9:20 AM December 21, Sanyi Police Substation of Mengcheng Public Security Bureau received an order from 110 Command Center: A girl named Jiangxing, of Quizhou, who was abducted into the area administered by the s
At about 9:20 AM December 21, Sanyi Police Substation of Mengcheng Public Security Bureau received an order from 110 Command Center: A girl named Jiangxing, of Quizhou, who was abducted into the area administered by the s
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Thanks for editing.
Regarding the confussion, it is that the girl just slipped away from the house where she was watched tightly and phoned 110. The following is the part of the story which explained how girl asked police to help her).
After arriving at Sanyi Town of Mengcheng County, there were 4 men and 2 women who came in a microbus, welcomed them, and warmly invi
Regarding the confussion, it is that the girl just slipped away from the house where she was watched tightly and phoned 110. The following is the part of the story which explained how girl asked police to help her).
After arriving at Sanyi Town of Mengcheng County, there were 4 men and 2 women who came in a microbus, welcomed them, and warmly invi
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Interesting tale, Jobb.
'After they arrived at Sanyi Town, Mengcheng County, 4 men and 2 women came in a microbus, welcomed them, and warmly invited them to dinner in a local villager's home. After dinner, Miss Jiang's boyfriend made the excuse that the house could not accommodate all of them, so he would leave and return tomorrow. But the next day, Mr. Li seemed to have vanished. Jian
'After they arrived at Sanyi Town, Mengcheng County, 4 men and 2 women came in a microbus, welcomed them, and warmly invited them to dinner in a local villager's home. After dinner, Miss Jiang's boyfriend made the excuse that the house could not accommodate all of them, so he would leave and return tomorrow. But the next day, Mr. Li seemed to have vanished. Jian
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If I could write in English as good as yours language skills, the tale would be wonderful.
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