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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
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Rerfernce for college admission

If you see any mistakes, plese correct me. Many thanks.

( reference for college admission)

When she first took my class, she was not such a proficient English writer and reader. However, in class, she has proven to be a responsible and hardworking person who is able to successfully fulfill all the requirements. Not only has her command of English greatly improved, but also she has developed personally into a mature individual ready in every way for her college years.
  

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When she first took my class, she was not such a proficient English writer and reader. However, in class, she has proven to be a responsible and hard-working person who is able to successfully fulfill all the requirements. Not only has her command of English greatly improved but also she has developed personally into a mature individua l ready in every way for her college years

  • When she first took my class, she was not such a proficient English writer and reader.
  • However, in class, she has proven to be a responsible and hard-working person who is able to successfully fulfill all the requirements.
  • Not only has her command of English greatly improved but also she has developed personally into a mature individua l ready in every way for her college years
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When she first took my class, she was not such a proficient English writer and reader. However, in class, she has proven to be a responsible and hard-working person who is able to successfully fulfill all the requirements. Not only has her command of English greatly improved but also she has developed personally into a mature individual ready in every way for h

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