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Antonija Posted 12 years ago
Vocabulary
Requiring the payment
Hi,
I do not know how this type of text should look and sound like. I guess it sounds too abrupt and not professional enough.
I would kindly ask you native speakers and others who have come across these types of texts to look at this paragraph and correct it.
Thank you.
As the payment has not been made yet neither by yourself, the importer of the vessel, nor by your mediator „XYSC“Ltd whom we have contacted in the last 16 months numerous times, we would kindly ask you to deliver the payment with according interests immediately and without delay.
I do not know how this type of text should look and sound like. I guess it sounds too abrupt and not professional enough.
I would kindly ask you native speakers and others who have come across these types of texts to look at this paragraph and correct it.
Thank you.
As the payment has not been made yet neither by yourself, the importer of the vessel, nor by your mediator „XYSC“Ltd whom we have contacted in the last 16 months numerous times, we would kindly ask you to deliver the payment with according interests immediately and without delay.
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The general tone is fine. ] without delay . I'm not certain what you mean by "according interests".
- The general tone is fine.
- ] without delay .
- I'm not certain what you mean by "according interests".
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The general tone is fine.
As the payment has not yet been made either by yourself, by the importer of the vessel, or by your mediator XYSC Ltd, whom we have contacted in the last 16 months numerous times, we would kindly ask you to deliver the payment with accrued interest [?] without delay.
I'm not certain what you mean by
As the payment has not yet been made either by yourself, by the importer of the vessel, or by your mediator XYSC Ltd, whom we have contacted in the last 16 months numerous times, we would kindly ask you to deliver the payment with accrued interest [?] without delay.
I'm not certain what you mean by
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This may be slightly better:
... deliver the payment, including accrued interest, without delay.
... deliver the payment, including accrued interest, without delay.
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