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Kamlesh12 Posted 15 years ago
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Required Help in mail correction.
Dear All,
I want to send a appology mail to my prospect client. Kindly suggest me the required corrections in below mail as per your convenience.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday.
I can understand that you are busy in the Data Collection, manipulation and Template selection process as you had mentioned me on your previous e-mails.
It will be great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project. I would try my best to serve you with 100% satisfaction. I have successfully done in past during my full time job tenure, which is my success story now.
I will be glad to help you on your project and complete it ASAP so that your all merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
Do you think there is a possibility of a Tele-call on skype to discuss further on templates's selection?
I hope you are still interested to provide me an opportunity.
I hope I am not bothering you with this e-mail.
Waiting for positive response.
Kamlesh
I want to send a appology mail to my prospect client. Kindly suggest me the required corrections in below mail as per your convenience.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday.
I can understand that you are busy in the Data Collection, manipulation and Template selection process as you had mentioned me on your previous e-mails.
It will be great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project. I would try my best to serve you with 100% satisfaction. I have successfully done in past during my full time job tenure, which is my success story now.
I will be glad to help you on your project and complete it ASAP so that your all merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
Do you think there is a possibility of a Tele-call on skype to discuss further on templates's selection?
I hope you are still interested to provide me an opportunity.
I hope I am not bothering you with this e-mail.
Waiting for positive response.
Kamlesh
Top answer
Dear Mr [surname], I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday. I do realize that you are busy in the data collection, manipulation and template selection process. It would be a great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project and help complete it ASAP so that all your merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
- Dear Mr [surname], I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday.
- I do realize that you are busy in the data collection, manipulation and template selection process.
- It would be a great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project and help complete it ASAP so that all your merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
- Would it be possible to hold a tele-call on Skype to discuss template selection further?
- I hope you are still interested in providing me this opportunity.
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Dear Mr [surname],
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday. I do realize that you are busy in the data collection, manipulation and template selection process.
It would be a great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project and help complete it ASAP so that all your merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused yesterday. I do realize that you are busy in the data collection, manipulation and template selection process.
It would be a great opportunity for me to work with you on your eBay Data Entry project and help complete it ASAP so that all your merchandise will be advertised before Christmas and New Year.
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