Require urgent help

Hello everyone. I have been working on my motivation letter for quite a while and now that it's finally complete i would like to know if there's anything I should change or any feedback would be highly appreciated.

Respected Sir/Madam,
My name is ABC and I am currently living and studying in DEF. I write this letter in the hope of pursuing my Bachelor’s degree in the Netherlands. I would like to demonstrate through this letter that I have the necessary personal qualities, academic qualifications and desire to succeed and to complete this course to a high standard. I am a driven individual who is passionate about the hotel industry and would sincerely welcome the opportunity to study at XYZ, The Hague. I am currently studying in PRS. I will be completing my schooling in this school. I am now looking forward to obtaining my Bachelor’s degree in Hotel Management. My goals include obtaining a degree in Hotel Management from an institute that can help me nurture and develop the skills that I have already obtained, whilst simultaneously assisting me to gather new skills and obtain efficient training and expertise to successfully join the hotel industry. In the long run, I would like to work within the hotel industry, as has been my lifelong dream.

Courses like the one offered through your college are exactly what I am looking for. I want to earn this degree via a reputable college, such as your own so that I can attain this degree along with a high standard of learning that comes along with it and help me build a strong foundation for my career. Studying in XYZ will also allow me to interact with students and teachers from across the globe. This experience will further prepare me for the industry.

As a student, I always had a fascination towards Business Studies and management studies. My school curriculum has exposed me to wide variety of topics under Economics, Accountancy and Business studies. This has helped me to better understand the fundamentals required to successfully complete this course with high standards. Besides the scholastic areas in school, I have also taken an active part in the Literary Club and the Music Club. My hobbies include reading, music, writing and playing Basketball. I am a socially comfortable person who has no problems with mingling with new people. Moreover, I welcome any opportunity to broaden my social network. My linguistic abilities provide a further advantage which will help me in the hotel industry. I have a good command over the English and Hindi languages. Through the years I have also inculcated a basic knowledge of French and Arabic.
I am a person who would enjoy studying and working alongside my like-minded fellow students and lecturers. I would sincerely welcome the opportunity to be a part of a prestigious institution such as your own. If given a chance to study in your college, I am highly confident that I can complete the course with a desire to achieve excellence and high standards.

Sincerely,
Prithvi Rao