Requesting a grammar and sentence structure review
Is this sentence too long, or a run on sentence? Or is it technically fine as it is?
I guess you can call someone who dislikes someone who "sacrificed" making money in a sport because of a "good" cause; when the same person idolizes people with incredibly bad human rights records and horrific crimes against humanity, wears clothing that depicts police officers as pigs, then is featured as a prominent athlete who "sacrificed" it all for something that he believed in, as confirmation bias.
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It's a disaster. It's so long and disorganized that I think the writer forgot what he wanted to say. eg I guess you can call someone what?
- It's a disaster.
- It's so long and disorganized that I think the writer forgot what he wanted to say.
- eg I guess you can call someone what?
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It's a disaster. It's so long and disorganized that I think the writer forgot what he wanted to say.
eg I guess you can call someone what?
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