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Topic: You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposit.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write and addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ...,
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Helen who rented your apartment before and returned it on December 01, 2020. Today I am writing to request for the return of the $1,000 deposit.
At the beginning when I telephoned your office to ask for the rental, I was told that when I rented your apartment, I had to pay $1,000 for the rent and an additional $1,000 deposit. The deposit would be returned if the apartment was vacated clean and undamaged. I agreed and we signed the contract. However, as of today I have returned the apartment to you for 10 days while your apartment was no breakages and no damage but I have not yet received a refund for my deposit ($1,000).
I respectfully request that you should return the deposit to me as soon as possible. I allow the longest execution period of the next 3 days. You may transfer it to my bank account - details of which are in the contract or send me cash at my office.
I do hope that after reading this letter, you will promptly refund the deposit to me. If not I will seek legal advice.
Yours faithfully,
To Helen
Dear Mr. Smith, (In English, we do not write "I am Mrs. Smith.
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Dear Mr. Smith,
(In English, we do not write "I am Mrs. Smith. We write "My name is Mrs. Smith.")
I am My name is Helen Jones (Helen is a common name. There may be five or six "Helen"s who rented flats. You must give your family