Request for valuable and experienced suggestion how I can make Motivation Letter better.

Here is mine Letter.You are requested to review it and suggest the changes.Thanks in advnace

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to apply for the master’s progrrme in International Humanitarian Action

My primary objective in writing this statement is to highlight my experiences and background which shaped me as a person who is dedicated to the pursuit of a career in not-for-profit sector as a health professional for the service of humanity. This is the programme which will groom me as state of art humanitarian medical aid professional with a solid experience and background of medical with recent my post graduation education in public health.

I grew up in a small town of X(country). I completed my higher school with biology, chemistry, and physics and earned my bachelor with major in economics. I moved to X(city) for my medical education. I moved back to my town after graduation and my house job. I worked as medical doctor about 19 month. I have been accepted to MPH program in X(Country). This journey from a small town of a developing country to the one of the most developed country has given me the intellectual capabilities, emotional maturity, and dedication that I will bring to the programme.

The experience of living in such sharp contrast to my life in X (city),X(country), has given me a broader view of the world and the ability to adapt to a different culture which every international student must possess.

Since my teenage I always find it interesting to work for the suffered people. I joined Leo club, sponsored program by Lions International. Since then I worked for different NGOs e.g eye camps, blood bank, fundraising for the cancer patient etc. I worked as a part of team during my community work and led a team of editorial board of student college magazine. I also served as elected class representative in the second year of medical college. These volunteer works groomed my organization and management skills. I always enjoyed my volunteer work. This kind of work always gives me satisfaction and feeling that I am contributing to decrease sufferings of humanity. This wonderful experience prompted me to pursue medical profession where I can serve the people in more effective way.

I graduated as medical doctor and started my work as medical officer /in charge of Basic Health Unit in rural area of district X. The exciting thing of my job was that I was not only working as medical doctor in the area but it also involved supervision , surveillance, monitoring, reporting of public health activities as well as recruiting, training and teaching of lady health workers. Later on, I decided to pursue my master in public health.

When I took my master in public health at X(city), X (country), I was not sure how interesting this post graduation would be for me. However, as I proceeded with my master, increased my level of confidence in my abilities of analysis of disease pattern and data base, recognition of potential risk , planning and timely action. I gained more exposure to administration aspect of health. Furthermore I gained more exposure to research while writing my thesis and summer work in biochemistry laboratory. My medical background helps me to grasp the subjects quickly. My MPH program was a good matched of my varied interests.

Now I would like to focus on a Master programme which offers a wide range of subjects with major in Public health in Humanitarian Aid and internship as a part of program, which will let me broaden my interests in International Humanitarian Action.

Most of not profit sector lack well trained local professional to run the projects in developing country especially in present senior. My training at the programme will provide them a reliable professional trained and aware of their need and standards of work. This will also increase my chances to get job higher and perform well .

I hope that, on consideration of my application, you will be persuaded of my potential to perform well in the programme..