Request for salary increment

Please correct my letter below to my Manager, I already send an email requesting for a salary increment,

and he just told me that he already forward my concern to our hr dept..this is li

ke a follow-up letter.

thanks.

Dear Mark,

Good morning, first thank you for reading this email and I apologize if I disturb you.

This is regarding my request for the salary increment; I believed you already forwarded my concern to our HR,

until now I did not receive any replies from them, my contract will finish this end of month.

I am confident that you will sincerely consider my request as soon as possible.

Thank you very much for your time and kind consideration, and I look forward to your response

Sincerely yours,

wesverg