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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Dear sir/madam, I have written a draft as below and would like your advice/comment.
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Request for salary increament
Dear sir/madam, I have written a draft as below and would like your advice/comment.
Thanks & Regards.
"I wish to inform you that I have successfully completed my Master degree in Management. As you are aware, I joined the company based on my first degree qualifications and have worked in the company since 2001 and to date have served the company to the best of my ability and have received excellent/good/satisfactory appraisals. I also attached the brief job description for your review.
By looking at my qualifications and comparing them with my colleagues in the labor market. I can see that I was employed on a low salary. Therefore I would be pleased if my salary range be adjusted to take into account my additional qualifications as mentioned above. I believe I should be emplaced on a higher salary scale commensurate with my current qualifications."
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please, could you rephrase what I have written in an academic way Dear Sir, I'd like to inform you that I have allready signed my contract and accepted all the terms that have been mentioned. My only concern is my basic salary which is still underpaid comparing this to the teachers with whom I joind this school and also comaring to my experience, qualifications, and your obsevations
- please, could you rephrase what I have written in an academic way Dear Sir, I'd like to inform you that I have allready signed my contract and accepted all the terms that have been mentioned.
- My only concern is my basic salary which is still underpaid comparing this to the teachers with whom I joind this school and also comaring to my experience, qualifications, and your obsevations
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please, could you rephrase what I have written in an academic way
Dear Sir,
I'd like to inform you that I have allready signed my contract and accepted all the terms that have been mentioned.
My only concern is my basic salary which is still underpaid comparing this to the teachers with whom I joind this school and also comaring to my experience, qualifications, and y
Dear Sir,
I'd like to inform you that I have allready signed my contract and accepted all the terms that have been mentioned.
My only concern is my basic salary which is still underpaid comparing this to the teachers with whom I joind this school and also comaring to my experience, qualifications, and y
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