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Elia Gomez Posted 9 years ago
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Request for review of the language of a research abstract
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The following is the English version of the abstract of my research.
I was wondering if my choice of the language is proper, correct and conveys the meaning simply without distracting nor throwing off the mind of the reader.
Please enlight me and thank you in advance.
"The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab literary men in the field of science fiction. This demonstration is established from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story until the arrival at an important conclusion. The latter is that the Arabic story was the first step towards the spring of the Arabic science fiction. However, for not relying on the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field, which is considered to be unfair and unjust to them.
Furthermore, this research aims to present an artistic and objective study of the most significant creations of the author Nabil Farouk in the field of science fiction, Particularly his masterpiece "The Future File". Huge amounts of effort were put into the latter, in order to portray the perfect picture for Egypt in the future. The study considered the most significant merits of Nabil Farouk's work and utilized simple and undemanding samples of it that correspond well with both reader and critic."
Hope everyone is having a great day
The following is the English version of the abstract of my research.
I was wondering if my choice of the language is proper, correct and conveys the meaning simply without distracting nor throwing off the mind of the reader.
Please enlight me and thank you in advance.
"The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab literary men in the field of science fiction. This demonstration is established from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story until the arrival at an important conclusion. The latter is that the Arabic story was the first step towards the spring of the Arabic science fiction. However, for not relying on the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field, which is considered to be unfair and unjust to them.
Furthermore, this research aims to present an artistic and objective study of the most significant creations of the author Nabil Farouk in the field of science fiction, Particularly his masterpiece "The Future File". Huge amounts of effort were put into the latter, in order to portray the perfect picture for Egypt in the future. The study considered the most significant merits of Nabil Farouk's work and utilized simple and undemanding samples of it that correspond well with both reader and critic."
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It needs to be made more concise: The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab science fiction writers from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story to its culmination in the spring of Arabic science fiction. Since they ignored the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field. This research presents an artistic evaluation and objective study of the most significant scientific fiction of Nabil Farouk, particularly his masterpiece The Future File.
- It needs to be made more concise: The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab science fiction writers from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story to its culmination in the spring of Arabic science fiction.
- Since they ignored the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field.
- This research presents an artistic evaluation and objective study of the most significant scientific fiction of Nabil Farouk, particularly his masterpiece The Future File.
- Great effort was put into this novel to perfectly portray the Egypt of the future.
- The study considers the merits of Farouk's work using examples simple for both reader and critic.
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It needs to be made more concise:
The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab science fiction writers from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story to its culmination in the spring of Arabic science fiction. Since they ignored the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field.
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The aim of this research is to demonstrate the efforts made by Arab science fiction writers from the inception and evolution of the Arabic story to its culmination in the spring of Arabic science fiction. Since they ignored the Arabic literary legacy, Arabic writers received very little attention for their contributions in this field.
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