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The project aims to raise awareness among women and find solutions to problems and issues that occur in their area among members of their group and provide them with legal awareness and legal support. This activity will be carried out directly through the setting up of the congresses and subsequently sending the cases to the relevant organs during the project.

In the area under the network umbrella, network members will hold a discussion and consultation session that will discuss the issues discussed during the four sessions and will include violence against women and women's rights.

In order to show men and women with their support for the fight against violence, 9 gurus of committed men will also be created. In order to advance this activity, we must have a memorandum with the relevant authorities in order to find people who are interested in 70 seals. Target help us. Provision should be made at the Office for Dispute Resolution purposes. If possible, public awareness of these topics will be addressed to program participants such as Bocher and others.

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gulalai Request for review and your beter point in adation

I understand the first part, but what do you mean by "beter point in adation"?

gulalaiThe project aims to raise awareness

What is the topic or subject of your writing? What is the title of the project? I cannot understand much of what you wrote. Can you write in simpler sentences?

The project aims to raise awareness among women and find solutions to problems and issues that occur in their area (What area? e.g. A section of England or a province of The Netherlands? ) among members of their group (What group?) and provide them with legal awareness and legal support. This activity will be carried out directly through the setting up of the congresses (Awkward. What congresses are you talking about?) and subsequently sending the cases to the relevant organs (An organ is a musical instrument or a distinct part of the human body such as the liver, heart, or lungs.) during the project.

(So far, I have no idea about what you mean. You need to define your terms - area, congress, group - before using them.)

In the area under the network umbrella, (??) network members will hold a discussion and consultation session that will discuss the issues discussed during the four sessions (Which sessions? You haven't mentioned any.) and will include violence against women and women's rights.

In order to show men and women with their support for the fight against violence, 9 gurus of committed men (??) will also be created ( Are you going to create men? How?) . In order to advance this activity, we must have a memorandum with the relevant authorities in order to find people who are interested in 70 seals. (A seal is a marine animal, an official stamp on a document, or a sticky substance that closes an envelope.) Target (The store?) help us. Provision should be made at the Office for Dispute Resolution purposes. If possible, public awareness of these topics will be addressed to program participants such as Bocher and others.

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