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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

Request for project change

Hello, I would like to sincerely thank you for promoting me to the position of Associate Systems Analyst in NSE.IT Ltd.. This is an opportunity for advancement, and I am very pleased to accept this promotion. As you know, after being a part of PXIL team for six months, i was moved to Collateral Management project at NSE,BKC. I worked there for around four months and then the same project got shifted to NCDEX,kanjurmarg.The BKC was comfortable for me as per traveling and traveling expenses both. But since project has been shifted to kanjurmarg i have been facing health related problems due to traveling and night shifts.The other reason is , I am getting married later this year and planning to shift to Dahisar.Its a humble request kindly allot me a new project preferred in western lines with no night shifts. I would again like to thank you and my other seniors for the expression of faith in my abilities that you have exhibited by this gesture, and I assure you that I will continue to be an asset to the company in my new role. regards, XYZ Please help with corrections
  

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Your request is not very clear. Also, make sure you capitalize all proper nouns, including I. This would be much more professional, because you state at the beginning what you are asking, and the request a follow-up answer: I am writing to express my appreciation for my recent promotion to the position of Associate Systems Analyst and to request a change of assignment to a different project.

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  • Your request is not very clear.
  • Also, make sure you capitalize all proper nouns, including I.
  • This would be much more professional, because you state at the beginning what you are asking, and the request a follow-up answer: I am writing to express my appreciation for my recent promotion to the position of Associate Systems Analyst and to request a change of assignment to a different project.
  • Since I joined my current project, it has moved to Kanjur Marg and I have been assigned night shifts.
  • This is a difficult situation because of the long commute and the night-time hours.
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Your request is not very clear.
Also, make sure you capitalize all proper nouns, including I.


This would be much more professional, because you state at the beginning what you are asking, and the request a follow-up answer:

I am writing to express my appreciation for my recent promotion to the position of Associate Systems Analyst and to request a change of assi
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Hi xyz,
Congratulations for two measure important things, first your promotion and you are getting married.. ! J
As per our last discussions before this assignment on this project, the night shift schedule has informed to you which is required by our client and the project situation. This schedule is also on rotation basis, which is hardly a week time in a month. It looks you have really d
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Hi Lakshya,

Congratulations for two measure important things, first your promotion and you are getting married.. ! J

As per our last discussions before this assignment on this project, the night shift schedule has informed to you which is required by our client and the project situation. This schedule is also on rotation basis, which is hardly a week time in a month. It looks you
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