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Fizzi Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Request for information

Dear all,

Would somebody please help me with my letter?

Regards,

Fizzi

Dear Madam,

As I indicated in our telephone conversation yesterday, I will be collecting data from the Canadian medical and pharmaceutical journals which are available in your library. In order to that, would it possible for me to have a list of that journals?. The list will help me to develop a plan for my research data collection as I will need to go to libraries around the country. Your help is greatly appreciated.

Yours Sincerely.
  

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Hi Fizzi, Welcome to the Forum. I've offered you a few small changes. Dear Madam, It's better to use her name, if you know it As I indicated in our telephone conversation yesterday, I will be collecting data from the Canadian medical and pharmaceutical journals which are available in your library.

  • Hi Fizzi, Welcome to the Forum.
  • I've offered you a few small changes.
  • Dear Madam, It's better to use her name, if you know it As I indicated in our telephone conversation yesterday, I will be collecting data from the Canadian medical and pharmaceutical journals which are available in your library.
  • In order to do that, would it possible for me to have a list of these journals?
  • This will help me to develop a plan for my research data collection, as I will need to go to libraries around the country.
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Hi Fizzi,

Welcome to the Forum. I've offered you a few small changes.

Dear Madam, It's better to use her name, if you know it

As I indicated in our telephone conversation yesterday, I will be collecting data from the Canadian medical and pharmaceutical journals which are available in your library. In order to d
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Thanks Clive,Emotion: smile
Cheers,
Fizzy

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