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Gulalai Posted 8 years ago
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Based on the belief of some women wrong full behavior against them mostly appear by those women, that shows himself Defenders of Women's Rights.

Some of the men are appeased with women's rights, but women are more oppressive than men in behavior with other women

Where ever a woman's face with Cruelty and injustice The hand of a woman is definitely involved, Most of the women in response with other women trying to create obstacles to the advancement of other woman or more trying to find a weak spot of each other

This kind of behavior is not limited to working range or area, but it can be a family and social Problem, in the social section it can occur in high levels of management and also in at lower levels of work.

  

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