I would like to seek comments on the below sentence structure and grammar for my reference. Thank you for your help. Dear Sir/ Madam I have been working in the engineering field for 20 years, focusing on electrical systems in China, and I have attained the following academic qualifications: BTech certificate (ABD College, 1980) [Certificate name ( [Technical College name] , 1982) Bachelor's degree with honours in Mechanical Engineering (XX University, 1992) Master's degree in Mechanical Management & Engineering (XX University, 1996) The Chartered Institution of ABC is one of the leaders and standard setters in mechanical engineering.
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