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Chowbarry Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Request for an urgent repair work
Please help me improve the following paragraphs. Thank you.
We wish to ask for your urgent assistance in examining the drinking fountain at our clubhouse. We have received complaints from several customers, stating their dissatisfaction about the slow outflow of water and non-provision of brass faucet on the drinking fountain, which prompt their deep concern about the inconvenience and hygiene problem when using it. Those customers request us to quickly rectify the substandard drinking fountain and they allegedly may lodge a complaint to the County Council if the situation remains changed by the end of this month.
In order to provide quality and safety facilities to our customers, we hope you can conduct a thorough study on the feasibility of improving the water outflow and adding a brass faucet on the drinking fountain and let us know the estimated cost of the work as far as practicable. Thank you for your assistance.
We wish to ask for your urgent assistance in examining the drinking fountain at our clubhouse. We have received complaints from several customers, stating their dissatisfaction about the slow outflow of water and non-provision of brass faucet on the drinking fountain, which prompt their deep concern about the inconvenience and hygiene problem when using it. Those customers request us to quickly rectify the substandard drinking fountain and they allegedly may lodge a complaint to the County Council if the situation remains changed by the end of this month.
In order to provide quality and safety facilities to our customers, we hope you can conduct a thorough study on the feasibility of improving the water outflow and adding a brass faucet on the drinking fountain and let us know the estimated cost of the work as far as practicable. Thank you for your assistance.
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With this letter, we are requesting your urgent assistance regarding the drinking fountain at our clubhouse. We have received complaints from several customers, who state their dissatisfaction about the slow flow of water and non-provision of brass (I don't understand what non-provision of brass means. ) faucet on the drinking fountain, which prompts their deep concern about the difficulty using the fountain and the hygiene problems using it presents.
- With this letter, we are requesting your urgent assistance regarding the drinking fountain at our clubhouse.
- We have received complaints from several customers, who state their dissatisfaction about the slow flow of water and non-provision of brass (I don't understand what non-provision of brass means.
- ) faucet on the drinking fountain, which prompts their deep concern about the difficulty using the fountain and the hygiene problems using it presents.
- Those customers have requested us to quickly repair or replace the substandard drinking fountain.
- The customers may lodge a complaint to the County Council if the situation remains unchanged by the end of this month.
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With this letter, we are requesting your urgent assistance regarding the drinking fountain at our clubhouse. We have received complaints from several customers, who state their dissatisfaction about the slow flow of water and non-provision of brass (I don't understand what non-provision of brass means. Do you mean that the fountain lacks a brass faucet?) faucet on the drinking founta
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Englishmaven, thank you for your correction.
non-provision of brass means absence of brass faucet or lacks a brass faucet.
as far as practicable, I should use as soon as possible.
non-provision of brass means absence of brass faucet or lacks a brass faucet.
as far as practicable, I should use as soon as possible.
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Oh. I was puzzled by "practicable." As soon as possible makes good sense in the connect of the letter.
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