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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Request for admission





Dr. David part

Address:xxxxx

Date:xxxxx



Dear sir,



I am Robert Smith the manager of

Nursing and Nurse anesthesia Department in Cella university, Terme. I got my MS in anesthesiology in 1994 and from that time until now I have taught various courses on anesthesiology at university and at the same time trained university students in university hospitals in Cella.

I would be really happy to know if it is possible to continue my study in anesthesiology and get my PhD in your university.

Meantime I would like to have exchange research programs with you in related fields.



Looking forward your prompt reply.



Yours sincerely



Robert Smith

Manager of nursing and nurse anaesthesia department



Email: xxxxxx



Tel: xxxxx

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dear sir Iwould like to know if this letter is correct. thanks so much .your prompt reply would be appreciated.

  

Top answer

Something is wonky with your punctuation. As a first step, you need to clean that up. Anonymous I got my MS in anesthesiology in 1994 and from that time until now I have taught various courses on anesthesiology at university and at the same time trained university students in university hospitals in Cella.

  • Something is wonky with your punctuation.
  • As a first step, you need to clean that up.
  • Anonymous I got my MS in anesthesiology in 1994 and from that time until now I have taught various courses on anesthesiology at university and at the same time trained university students in university hospitals in Cella.
  • When I put the above sentence through my interpretation machine, it just says you've been busy.
  • Add some specifics or reasons why someone should care about that sentence.
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Something is wonky with your punctuation. As a first step, you need to clean that up.
AnonymousI got my MS in anesthesiology in 1994 and from that time until now I have taught various courses on anesthesiology at university and at the same time trained university students in university hospitals in Cella.
When I put the above sentence through my interpretation

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