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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Reports that will be sent to Bank A

Hi,

I want to say the following sentence but it is too long:
I will produce reports that will be sent to Bank A, including report A, report B, and report C.

Question:
Which sentences can exactly convey my idea?

Sentence1:
I will produce reports for Bank A, including report A, report B, and report C.
Sentence2:
I will produce reports to Bank A, including report A, report B, and report C.
Sentence3:
I will produce Bank A's reports, including report A, report B, and report C.

Thanks
  

Top answer

You can use bullet points for the reports, if your sentence becomes too unwieldy with the descriptions: I will produce the following reports for Bank A: Report A (description) Report B (description) Report C (description)

  • You can use bullet points for the reports, if your sentence becomes too unwieldy with the descriptions: I will produce the following reports for Bank A: Report A (description) Report B (description) Report C (description)
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4 Answers
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You can use bullet points for the reports, if your sentence becomes too unwieldy with the descriptions:

I will produce the following reports for Bank A:
  • Report A (description)
  • Report B (description)
  • Report C (description)
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Sentence 1 conveys this correctly.

Sentence 2 is not grammatically correct and Sentence 3 means that you produce reports that below to Bank A, not that they will be sent there.
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uktousI want to say the following sentence but it is too long
I disagree that it is too long, but sentence 1 is your best choice.
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Hi,

I will produce reports that will be sent to Bank A, including report A, report B, and report C.

A further comment.

I take this sentence to mean that you will also produce other reports in addition to A, B and C.



I don't know if this is your intended meaning.



Clive

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