You can't use the sentence at all as it stands: it mixes direct (without quotation marks) and indirect. You must choose: Coke said "Good evening, officer" and asked if he could help him. Coke greeted the officer and asked if he could help him.
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Mister MicawberYou can't use the sentence at all as it stands: it mixes direct (without quotation marks) and indirect.
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You must choose:
Coke said "Good evening, officer" and asked if he could help him.
Coke greeted the officer and asked if he could help him.