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Flower1234 Posted 14 years ago
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I received an urgent call today from Mary of AB Company saying that they needed to schedule an appointment with my boss next Tuesday. I told them that I would need to check the date with my boss first to make sure he was available. I agreed to call her as soon as I had talked with my boss.
I received an urgent call today from Mary of AB Company saying that they needed to schedule an appointment with my boss next Tuesday. I told them that I would need to check the date with my boss first to make sure he was available. I agreed to call her as soon as I had talked with my boss.
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Hello again. Again, there's nothing wrong with your paragraph but I'll suggest some changes. Emphasis in CAPS.
- Hello again.
- Again, there's nothing wrong with your paragraph but I'll suggest some changes.
- Emphasis in CAPS.
- Mary of [or FROM] AB Company called [or phoned] AT 2 PM today, asking to schedule [or ARRANGE] an urgent appointment [or MEETING] with JOHN JOHNSON next Tuesday.
- I said I would check with JOHN and call her BACK as soon as POSSIBLE.
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Hello again.
Again, there's nothing wrong with your paragraph but I'll suggest some changes. Emphasis in CAPS.
Mary of [or FROM] AB Company called [or phoned] AT 2 PM today, asking to schedule [or ARRANGE] an urgent appointment [or MEETING] with JOHN JOHNSON next Tuesday. I said I would check with JOHN and call her BACK as soon as POSSIBLE.
Again, there's nothing wrong with your paragraph but I'll suggest some changes. Emphasis in CAPS.
Mary of [or FROM] AB Company called [or phoned] AT 2 PM today, asking to schedule [or ARRANGE] an urgent appointment [or MEETING] with JOHN JOHNSON next Tuesday. I said I would check with JOHN and call her BACK as soon as POSSIBLE.
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