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Tanit Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Report on waste management - 1

1font00Could somebody check a chapter of my report?02font02br
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00Chapter 01i00X02i00 justifies the proposal with reference to the Waste Local Plan, which recognises the need for a sustainable waste management. According to this plan, the best options are minimisation and re-use, followed by recycling and composting, energy recover, and, only as a last resource, disposal in a landfill. Even though the proposal implies a shift up in the waste hierarchy, with an important reduction of landfill-disposed waste, it should be noted that this project skips the first two options (reduction and re-use), which need nevertheless to be addressed at a higher level. 02br
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00The Local Plan estimates waste production in the County to equal 900,000 tonnes in 2002; the proposed development would manage 420,000 tonnes per year, which "equates approximately to that expected to arise from the districts of 01i00X, Y and Z02i00" (01i00source02i00). This quantity can be divided into three parts:02br
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00· 01i00X X X02i00 tonnes per year to recycling02br
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00· 01i00Y Y Y02i00 tonnes per year to composting02br
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00· 01i00Z Z Z 02i00tonnes per year to energy recovery02br
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00Undoubtedly, the amount of waste managed in the proposed facility would be a significant share of the total amount of waste produced in the County. However, it should be noted that the sentence "420,000 tonnes per annum of municipal waste will be diverted from landfill" (01i00source02i00) is misleading, since a non well-defined amount (01i00XYZ02i00 tonnes per year, as stated on page 01i00xyz02i00, is a rough estimate, valid only under specific assumptions) of ashes is expected to be collected, and the possibility of disposal in a landfill is not being excluded.02br
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00The proposal is also related to the planning context at the national, county and local level. The UK legislation (01i00source02i00) does not require the inclusion of this relationship in the EIS, as other European legislations do. Reference to the planning context has probably been added because the issue has been raised by the County Council during the scoping phase. Chapter 01i00Y 02i00of the EIS tries to establish a sound planning basis for the proposal, in terms of:02br
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00· need for a reduction in the amount of waste disposed of in landfills;02br
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00· need for an increase of recycling and composting;02br
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00· recognition of waste as a renewable source of energy, depending on the technology utilised.02br
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01font00Thank you in advance!02font0-
  

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0Hi,02br 02br 00Is it me? 00 00Perhaps I am confused by your word choices and how you set up the tone. 00 00For instance in your first paragraph:02br 02br 00Chapter 01i 00X02i 00 justifies the proposal with reference to the01font 00 02font 01b 01font 00Waste Local Plan02font 00,02b 00 which 01b 01font 00recognises 02font 02b 00the need for a sustainable waste management.

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00Is it me?
  • 00 00Perhaps I am confused by your word choices and how you set up the tone.
  • 00 00For instance in your first paragraph:02br 02br 00Chapter 01i 00X02i 00 justifies the proposal with reference to the01font 00 02font 01b 01font 00Waste Local Plan02font 00,02b 00 which 01b 01font 00recognises 02font 02b 00the need for a sustainable waste management.
  • According to this plan, the best options are minimisation and re-use, followed by recycling and composting, energy recover, and, only as a last resource, disposal in a landfill.
  • Even though the proposal implies a 01b 01font 00shift up02font 02b 00 in the 01b 01font 00waste hierarchy02font 02b 00, with an important reduction of landfill-disposed waste, it should be noted that this project skips the first two options (reduction and re-use), which need 01b 01font 00nevertheless02font 00 t02b 00o be addressed at a higher level.
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0Hi,02br
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00Is it me? I like to help but I seem to have a difficult time understanding exactly what you try to get across in your essay.00 00Perhaps I am confused by your word choices and how you set up the tone. 00 00For instance in your first paragraph:02br
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00Chapter 01i00X02i00 justifies the proposal with
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0Hi, Goodman,02br
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00Thank you very much for your kindness!02br
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00Many of the words/expressions you've highlighted are not a choice of mine... for instance02br
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00- "01font00Waste Local Plan02font00" is a Plan prepared (in this case) by the County Council (actually, by some couns
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0Hi Tanit,02br
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00To me, if I were to compose something which I expect it to be understood by most readers, it would be unwise of me to compose it in a specialized language or in terminology only known to a few.00 00I am not criticizing you. This is straightly my view.02br
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00I find the terminology used in your report rather odd. To allow e
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0Hi, Goodman,02br
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00Thank you for your comments and constructive advice, I'll try to rephrase some sentences, so as to make the chapter more readable.02br
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00If you google 01b01font00"Waste Local Plan"02font02b00 and 01b01font00"waste production" 02
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0 It depends who you are writing your report for. If it for the general public then you'll need to explain or re-phrase the industry jargon. If it is for those in the waste industry or the local council then they will understand these terms and you should use the correct technical expressions. 0-
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0Thank you Nona.02br
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00I'm supposed to be the local council's consultant (but it's actually an academic essay).02br
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00Should you have any advice about the grammar ...02br
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00Thank you again.0-
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0In that case you do need to use all the correct technical terms and all the lovely beaurocratic language beloved by local authorities.02br
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00expected to arise from the districts of 01i00X, Y and Z02i00" (01i00source02i00). - 00not clear if each district will produce this amount or if it is combined00· 02br
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01cite10Tanit12cite10Hi, Goodman,12br
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10Thank you for your comments and constructive advice, I'll try to rephrase some sentences, so as to make the chapter more readable.12br
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10If you google 11b11font10"Waste Local Plan"12font12b10
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0Nona and Goodman,02br
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00Sorry for being late, just wanted to thank you both for your help.0-

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