Report for CAE

This is the first writing task I'm doing so I would really appreciate the corrections. Thank y'all

This is the task.
Last weekend you took part ina soports event organised by your local sports centre. The sports centre is now considering wheter to organise similar events in future and has asked you to write a report about your experiences.
Read the programme for the event on which you have made some notes. Then, using the information appropriatelu, write a report for your Sports Centre, commenting on the strenghrs of the event, suggesting what kind of people might be interested in attendin similiar events and recommending how it could be improved in the future.

HAMBLING SPORTS CENTRE
weekend event for 18-25 year-olds ( good for schoolchildren too?)
Chances to try out different sports (tried lots e.g....)
Expert instructors for all sports (great!)
Join in competitions (table tennis not well organised)
Talks: Fitness for different agers, careers in sport, the history of sport. (hard to hear)
Healthy eating- Q and A session (too short)

Here is my report.

Hambling Sports Centre Report

Introduction

The purpose of this report is to evaluate the Hambling Sports Centre’s event, which was organized last weekend. It will also describe what kind of people could be interested on attending to it and give some recommendations so it could be improved.

Strengths

The event was generally successful. The people attending to it were able to practice a large number of different sports. Some of them were regular sports like tennis, basketball or soccer, but the event also gave us the chance to do some unusual sports like lacrosse or kayak polo.
Hambling Sports Centre also offered numerous coaches. They were really nice and explained to everybody all the things they needed to do when trying out the sport, like warming up or stretching.

Age recommendation

The event could be fun for everyone, especially for active people. It was organized to people aged between eighteen and twenty five; however, in my opinion it could be really interesting for schoolchildren, giving them the chance to try out new sports and teaching them about a healthier lifestyle. The talk about careers in sport would definitely be more interesting for teenagers under eighteen, who are trying to find out what they want to study, than for older ones.

Recommendations

Although I had a good time at the event, I would however, want to suggest some improvements. In the afternoon the tennis table was packed, making difficult the enjoyment of the activity, while in the morning there was no one to play with. If the tennis tournament had been best organized, this wouldn’t have happened.
I would also consider buying new microphones or some amplifiers in order to be able to hear the talks. The topics were all good ones, so not being able to hear them was really disappointing. In addition, the event would be perfect if there was more time left for the Questions and Answers session.
Forgetting about these small problems, I enjoyed the event and I have no hesitation in recommending it to my friends and family.