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Kanou Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Report correction
Hello! Could you please correct this report? I got really confused with the pronouns in this one!
Wording:
You have been working in an international hotel chain for a month as part of a work experience programme. The training manager has asked you to write a report in which you
- describe the tasks and activities you participated in
- explain any problems with the programme
- make recommendations for two improvements for future programmes
Report: work experience in an international hotel chain.
Introduction
The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme. The final section makes recommendatios as how the programme could be improved.
Tasks and activities
Since the first day of the work experience programme, the trainees were asked to wear a uniform which turned out to be very fashionable. The uniform gave the newly arrived confidence in themselves to accomplish their tasks with effectiveness. Everyoneon the programme had to pass through different steps. One begins in the restaurant serving the food, then they enter the kitchen preparing the food, after being in the restaurant one has to take care of the reception, and at the end the trainee is responsible for part of the hotel’s management.
Problems
I must say that at first glance, the programme seems very attractive since one has to do so many tasks that will keep one busy and not bored. Nonetheless, I had the feeling that everything went too fast therefore the atmosphere was always stressful. The teachers and mentors never had time to explain any doubts, especially in the restaurant and kitchen. In addition, patience wasn’t one of the teachers’ qualities. I often had to learn how to improvise, since the trainees were supposed to have already a strong knowledge of working in a hotel.
Recommendations
I would make the following recommendations:
- To implement an extra week in the restaurant and in the kitchen, where the teachers explain the rules and refresh the knowledge one should have achieved until that moment.
- To take on more teachers if necessary, especially in high seasons so that the trainees can continue to learn.
Wording:
You have been working in an international hotel chain for a month as part of a work experience programme. The training manager has asked you to write a report in which you
- describe the tasks and activities you participated in
- explain any problems with the programme
- make recommendations for two improvements for future programmes
Report: work experience in an international hotel chain.
Introduction
The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme. The final section makes recommendatios as how the programme could be improved.
Tasks and activities
Since the first day of the work experience programme, the trainees were asked to wear a uniform which turned out to be very fashionable. The uniform gave the newly arrived confidence in themselves to accomplish their tasks with effectiveness. Everyoneon the programme had to pass through different steps. One begins in the restaurant serving the food, then they enter the kitchen preparing the food, after being in the restaurant one has to take care of the reception, and at the end the trainee is responsible for part of the hotel’s management.
Problems
I must say that at first glance, the programme seems very attractive since one has to do so many tasks that will keep one busy and not bored. Nonetheless, I had the feeling that everything went too fast therefore the atmosphere was always stressful. The teachers and mentors never had time to explain any doubts, especially in the restaurant and kitchen. In addition, patience wasn’t one of the teachers’ qualities. I often had to learn how to improvise, since the trainees were supposed to have already a strong knowledge of working in a hotel.
Recommendations
I would make the following recommendations:
- To implement an extra week in the restaurant and in the kitchen, where the teachers explain the rules and refresh the knowledge one should have achieved until that moment.
- To take on more teachers if necessary, especially in high seasons so that the trainees can continue to learn.
Top answer
Introduction The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience programme in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme. The final section makes recommendatio n s as how the programme could be improved. Tasks and activities Since the first day of the work experience programme, the trainees were asked to wear a uniform which turned out to be very fashionable.
- Introduction The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience programme in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme.
- The final section makes recommendatio n s as how the programme could be improved.
- Tasks and activities Since the first day of the work experience programme, the trainees were asked to wear a uniform which turned out to be very fashionable.
- The uniform gave the newly arrived confidence in themselves their ability to accomplish their tasks with effectiveness.
- Everyon e o n the programme had to pass through work in several areas of the hotel.
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Introduction
The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience programme in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme. The final section makes recommendations as how the programme could be improved.
Tasks and activities
Since the first day of the work expe
The principal aim of this report is to provide information about the trainees’ tasks and activities during the work experience programme in an international hotel chain, and the problems encountered with the programme. The final section makes recommendations as how the programme could be improved.
Tasks and activities
Since the first day of the work expe
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Sorry for the late reply! I was really busy with work! I understand all the corrections, thank you!
teechrI highlighted the comma splice in blue.Thank you for this detail =)
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