Report about incident in school canteen
To: The Principal of SMK Teluk Batik,Perak.
Report on Incident at the School Canteen.
On the 12 March 2017 there was an incident happened at the school canteen during the resess.It involved two of form 4 students named Mei Mei,who was hit by a mysterious ball and Raimi,whose arm was sclded by hot noodles.
The incident began with Mei Mei and Raimi went to the school canteen to have their recess together.Suddenly,an unexpected ball coming out of nowhere hit her hand.Instinctively,Raimi the force of the ball caused Mei Mei to accidentally throw the bowl and landed on Raimi,who was queueing up behind her.
Due the incident,Mei Mei wrist was twisted due to the impact of the ball and as she tried to brace her self from the fall using the same hand.
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I have highlighted some errors, and corrected others. To: The Principal of SMK Teluk Bati k,P erak. Report on Incident at the School Canteen.
- I have highlighted some errors, and corrected others.
- To: The Principal of SMK Teluk Bati k,P erak.
- Report on Incident at the School Canteen.
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I have highlighted some errors, and corrected others.
To: The Principal of SMK Teluk Batik,Perak.
Report on Incident at the School Canteen.
On the 12 March 2017 there was an incident happened at the school canteen during the resess.It involved tw
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