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Reyhanadiel Posted 19 years ago
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What are the good things and bad things about Indonesia?
Indonesia is a nation in Southeast Asia. Comprising about 17,000 islands, it makes the world's largest archipelagic country. If we go there, we will find so many good things such as a very good scenery and a potential economic income. Start from the air if you go by plane. You will see green scenery down there. Because Indonesia location is in a great geographic position, and tropical climate, plants can grow easily. As an example, in Sumatra if we go through from Aceh to Lampung by car, you will find many varieties of trees that can be a potential economic income for this country. You will find wild animals too if you go to in a deep forest in Sumatra, such as Sumatran elephant, Sumatran Tiger, and Orangutan that we never seen in another country. The good things does not stop in Sumatra. If we go through at Indonesian Sea, coast to coast from south Java coast to Nusa Tenggara coast by ship, we will be presented by fishes dance in the sea, and beautiful scenery of coral ecosystem. Wow, It will be a good tourism destination, you can dive if you want. Those are only a little good things about Indonesia although we only see in nature environment.
But, behind that all beauty, there are some of bad things. One of them is incapable to manage the beauty. I still remember, Japan Prime Minister said “give me Sumatra and I will make it will become Japan, and I will give Japan to Indonesia, it will become Sumatra.”. The most of Indonesian does not care about their surrounding environment. They cannot use their advantage maximally. Such as the forest in deep Sumatra, it should be like others forest arounds the world. It should be filled with loud noises of animals. But due to the carelessness of human which is they like to wild hunting and wildfire, the forest become silent and bare. And what happen in coral ecosystem? The bad Indonesian, use an easy and the cheapest way to reach what they want. They use large trawling or (the worst is) bomb to catch fish in the sea without thinking about the coral ecosystem down there. If they are dead, an erosion cannot be avoid.
is it okay??
can you explain, what the mistake?
Indonesia is a nation in Southeast Asia. Comprising about 17,000 islands, it makes the world's largest archipelagic country. If we go there, we will find so many good things such as a very good scenery and a potential economic income. Start from the air if you go by plane. You will see green scenery down there. Because Indonesia location is in a great geographic position, and tropical climate, plants can grow easily. As an example, in Sumatra if we go through from Aceh to Lampung by car, you will find many varieties of trees that can be a potential economic income for this country. You will find wild animals too if you go to in a deep forest in Sumatra, such as Sumatran elephant, Sumatran Tiger, and Orangutan that we never seen in another country. The good things does not stop in Sumatra. If we go through at Indonesian Sea, coast to coast from south Java coast to Nusa Tenggara coast by ship, we will be presented by fishes dance in the sea, and beautiful scenery of coral ecosystem. Wow, It will be a good tourism destination, you can dive if you want. Those are only a little good things about Indonesia although we only see in nature environment.
But, behind that all beauty, there are some of bad things. One of them is incapable to manage the beauty. I still remember, Japan Prime Minister said “give me Sumatra and I will make it will become Japan, and I will give Japan to Indonesia, it will become Sumatra.”. The most of Indonesian does not care about their surrounding environment. They cannot use their advantage maximally. Such as the forest in deep Sumatra, it should be like others forest arounds the world. It should be filled with loud noises of animals. But due to the carelessness of human which is they like to wild hunting and wildfire, the forest become silent and bare. And what happen in coral ecosystem? The bad Indonesian, use an easy and the cheapest way to reach what they want. They use large trawling or (the worst is) bomb to catch fish in the sea without thinking about the coral ecosystem down there. If they are dead, an erosion cannot be avoid.
is it okay??
can you explain, what the mistake?
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