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Soni Sahni Posted 10 years ago
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hi

pls help me drafting a reply on behalf of my director

After completing my first five years in the company I was able to take a sabbatical last Autumn and it gave me time to reflect on the business and how I feel about Superfry. I am very proud of the business, I am looking forward to the next 5 years leading the company and delivering our new goals set through the 5 year plan.

I want us to really focus on these priorities and deliver real growth in the core of our business, with pace and conviction. I realise that there is more I can do to help and so I have decided to become more directly involved in the business to lead and drive the move to becoming faster and stronger.

After almost six years with the company, Simon our Trading Director, feels he needs to build the next stage of his career elsewhere. So, as we enter the next five year phase of growth for the company I have discussed the various plans with Simon and we both agreed that now is therefore the natural time for him to move on and bring his time at Superdry to a close.

I will not start a search to replace Simon immediately, and instead have asked Emma Kate Brown and Nick (Head of Merchandising) to report directly to me.

I look forward to meeting you in the coming months and continuing to develop our relationships.
  

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Hello, Soni Sahni—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member. Is the above the letter that you are writing, or the letter that you received?

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Hello, Soni Sahni—and welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering as a member.

Is the above the letter that you are writing, or the letter that you received? We are not a letter-writing service. Also, we are not responsible for content. If you will write a draft letter containing the required information and post it here, we will check its English for you.
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i have received..and need to reply on above matter
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Soni Sahnii have received..and need to reply on above matter
Then please re-read my post above.
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Soni Sahnihi
Hi
Soni Sahnipls
This is not a word. It is textspeak http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=Textspeak and not appropriate to use outside text messages and web chats. Please
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In addition, the letter you received states facts. It does not ask questions or ask for information.
What sort of a reply do you imagine is needed beyond "I look forward to working with you as well"?

Regardless of your reply, you will need to start using capital letters if you wish to write proper sentences.

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