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Xpistonsx Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Rephrasing Thesis

I need some help rephrasing this thesis statement for the beginning of my conclusion paragraph: Both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm, illustrate people are hungry for power. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks.
  

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xpistonsx Both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm , illustrate people are hungry for power. Suggestion: The main characters in both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm are ruthless and power-hungry.

  • xpistonsx Both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm , illustrate people are hungry for power.
  • Suggestion: The main characters in both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm are ruthless and power-hungry.
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xpistonsxBoth William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm, illustrate people are hungry for power.
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The main characters in both William Golding's Lord of the Flies and George Orwell's Animal Farm are ruthless and power-hungry.
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