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Lordskorpz Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Rephrasing

How would you write this sentence?

When the children wake up for school they brush their teeth, get dressed, eat breakfast and then they take the school bus to school.

Note: I am unsure about the commas and capitalization of nouns.

  

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lordskorpz When the children wake up for school , they brush their teeth, get dressed, and eat breakfast , and then they take the school bus to school. I would write it as shown above. 1.

  • lordskorpz When the children wake up for school , they brush their teeth, get dressed, and eat breakfast , and then they take the school bus to school.
  • I would write it as shown above.
  • 1.
  • , ) 2.
  • comma to separate independent clauses (just before the conjunction) Both clauses have an explicit subject.
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lordskorpzWhen the children wake up for school, they brush their teeth, get dressed, and eat breakfast, and then they take the school bus to school.

I would write it as shown above.

1. comma after a subordinate clause of time (

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