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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Rephrasing

The second I found out I became the President of the Student Government was the happiest moment in my life.

Does this sentence sound a little bit awkward? if yes, could you please rephrase it, thanks
  

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The happiest moment of my life was when I found out I had been elected president of the student government.

  • The happiest moment of my life was when I found out I had been elected president of the student government.
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The happiest moment of my life was when I found out I had been elected president of the student government.

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