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Rephrasing
0 "Security is a critical portion of the IP PBX design and is fully as important as the design of the network." 02 br
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00 Kindly advise whether this sentence can be rephrased as follows: 02 br
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00 "Security is a critical portion of the IP PBX design and it is as fully as important as the design of the network." 02 br
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00 Thanks and regards 0-
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00 Kindly advise whether this sentence can be rephrased as follows: 02 br
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00 "Security is a critical portion of the IP PBX design and it is as fully as important as the design of the network." 02 br
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00 Thanks and regards 0-
Top answer
0 The added 'it' in the second is OK, but there are too many 'as's-- remove the first one. 0-
- 0 The added 'it' in the second is OK, but there are too many 'as's-- remove the first one.
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0 The added 'it' in the second is OK, but there are too many 'as's-- remove the first one. 0-
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