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Djain Shop Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Rephrase to improve sentence structure
Hi,
I would like to add the following sentences on my resume for interviewer to really get my resume noticed (I feel so), but I am not happy with its overall formation and structure.
Can you guys help restructure the following sentence(s) while preserving the meaning so it gives a better impression ??
_WORK PHILOSOPHY: I strive to manifest company's values, branding style, product & services, into company’s website, that aims to create the impression that client's wants in their visitors mind._
_As a result of efforts, clients saw their tremendous business and income boost, giving them many fold ROI and transformed them into brands in their resp._
Guys, any help is appreciated.
thanks
dk
I would like to add the following sentences on my resume for interviewer to really get my resume noticed (I feel so), but I am not happy with its overall formation and structure.
Can you guys help restructure the following sentence(s) while preserving the meaning so it gives a better impression ??
_WORK PHILOSOPHY: I strive to manifest company's values, branding style, product & services, into company’s website, that aims to create the impression that client's wants in their visitors mind._
_As a result of efforts, clients saw their tremendous business and income boost, giving them many fold ROI and transformed them into brands in their resp._
Guys, any help is appreciated.
thanks
dk
Top answer
I strive to incorporate the company's values, branding style, product, and services into the company's website with the goal of creating the image clients want to impress upon their visitors' minds. As of result of my effort, clients saw their business increase greatly, boosting their income, giving them many times the (I don't know what ROI is) _____, transforming them into brands in their _____ (I don't know what resp is).
- I strive to incorporate the company's values, branding style, product, and services into the company's website with the goal of creating the image clients want to impress upon their visitors' minds.
- As of result of my effort, clients saw their business increase greatly, boosting their income, giving them many times the (I don't know what ROI is) _____, transforming them into brands in their _____ (I don't know what resp is).
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I strive to incorporate the company's values, branding style, product, and services into the company's website with the goal of creating the image clients want to impress upon their visitors' minds.
As of result of my effort, clients saw their business increase greatly, boosting their income, giving them many times the (I don't know what ROI is) _____, transforming them into brands in
As of result of my effort, clients saw their business increase greatly, boosting their income, giving them many times the (I don't know what ROI is) _____, transforming them into brands in
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