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Johnie Posted 8 years ago
Grammar
Rephrase of a sentence
Need help rephrasing this sentence to make it sound better.
Eventually, this caused the bridge to collapse which lead to a huge loss of life and resources.
My attempt:
Eventually, this caused the bridge to collapse, which resulted in several deaths.
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johnie Eventually, this caused the bridge to collapse, which resulted in several deaths. That is fine but fails to mention resources.
- johnie Eventually, this caused the bridge to collapse, which resulted in several deaths.
- That is fine but fails to mention resources.
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johnieEventually, this caused the bridge to collapse, which resulted in several deaths.
That is fine but fails to mention resources.
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