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Mezzopiano Posted 6 years ago
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Rephrase a scientific sentence

We next sought to determine if conjugation of a poly(M6Pn)-bearing glycopolypeptide to an antibody would reprogram the antibody to rapidly direct extracellular agents to the lysosome.

I'm trying to rephrase the sentence above. Please correct my sentence.

We next tried to determine if conjugation of a poly(M6Pn)-bearing glycopolypeptide to an antibody would mske the antibody be able to directly take extracellular agents to the lysosome faster.

  

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Your version didn't seem to rephrase very much. How about this version? Next we tried to find out if conjugation of a poly(M6Pn)-bearing glycopolypeptide to an antibody would enable the antibody to take extracellular agents to the lysosome directly and faster.

  • Your version didn't seem to rephrase very much.
  • How about this version?
  • Next we tried to find out if conjugation of a poly(M6Pn)-bearing glycopolypeptide to an antibody would enable the antibody to take extracellular agents to the lysosome directly and faster.
  • Clive
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Your version didn't seem to rephrase very much. How about this version?

Next we tried to find out if conjugation of a poly(M6Pn)-bearing glycopolypeptide to an antibody would enable the antibody to take extracellular agents to the lysosome directly and faster.

Clive

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