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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Repeating "when" twice
How would you phrase this? Would you reword or is having when twice correct?
When she gives her newborn a bottle when it's dark out, she feels more stressed than when she gives her a bottle when it is light out.
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When she gives her newborn a bottle when it's dark out, she feels more stressed than when she gives her a bottle when it is light out.
Thanks
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No problem with the when s. The second when in each case could be replaced by and . she feels more stressed than when it is light out.
- No problem with the when s.
- The second when in each case could be replaced by and .
- she feels more stressed than when it is light out.
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No problem with the whens. The second when in each case could be replaced by and. Or, you could change the structure of the sentence to: If she gives her newborn a bottle when it's dark out, .she feels more stressed than when it is light out.
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