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Myvi Posted 15 years ago
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Repeated

"The corresponding ratios for predictor formulae are w=1, w=2 and w=3. After completely substituting the possible ratios for predictor, the predictor of ABC method could be obtained and tabulated as in Tables 1-8."

Seems like the word predictor is repeated. Any suggestion to make this sentence nicely?

Thanks a lot...
  

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It can be tightened up: The corresponding ratios for predictor formulae are w=1, w=2 and w=3. After substituting all the possible ratios, the predictor for the ABC method was obtained and tabulated (Tables 1-8). However, 'w=1' is not a ratio in the common sense of the word; is there another more appropriate one?

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  • It can be tightened up: The corresponding ratios for predictor formulae are w=1, w=2 and w=3.
  • After substituting all the possible ratios, the predictor for the ABC method was obtained and tabulated (Tables 1-8).
  • However, 'w=1' is not a ratio in the common sense of the word; is there another more appropriate one?
  • (These are ratios: X/Y, X:Y)
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It can be tightened up:

The corresponding ratios for predictor formulae are w=1, w=2 and w=3. After substituting all the possible ratios, the predictor for the ABC method was obtained and tabulated (Tables 1-8).

However, 'w=1' is not a ratio in the common sense of the word; is there another more appropriate one? (These are ratios: X/Y, X:Y)
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Since there is no one can give any suggestion or comment, then I humbly request you to check my sentences. Thanks a lot sir..

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