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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
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renovation
In case the reason of the renaming is the renovation for upgrading the total quality of the hotel, which of the following sentences sounds better?
1)In line with renovation, Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014.
2)After renovation, Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014.
3)Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014, following upgrading and refurbishment works.
1)In line with renovation, Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014.
2)After renovation, Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014.
3)Hotel Lake was renamed Hotel Grand Lake View on Mar 1st,2014, following upgrading and refurbishment works.
Top answer
I vote for 1). The others are fine, though.
- I vote for 1).
- The others are fine, though.
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