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Osee Posted 19 years ago
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renew study permit.

I am going to renew my study permit; would you like to help me polish the following paragraph? Thanks a lot.

I expect completing my current degree requirements by 31 August 2008 at the latest, and attending the Convocation Ceremony of Osee's University usually scheduled at the end of November 2008. So I request to extend my stay in Canada until 30 December 2008, with the extra one month for dealing with possible post-graduation or leaving-Canada matters.
  

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Osee I am going to renew my study permit; would you like to help me polish the following paragraph? Thanks a lot. I expect completing my current degree requirements by 31 August 2008 at the latest, and attending the Convocation Ceremony of Osee's University usually scheduled at the end of November 2008.

— Feebs11

  • Osee I am going to renew my study permit; would you like to help me polish the following paragraph?
  • Thanks a lot.
  • I expect completing my current degree requirements by 31 August 2008 at the latest, and attending the Convocation Ceremony of Osee's University usually scheduled at the end of November 2008.
  • So I request to extend my stay in Canada until 30 December 2008, with the extra one month for dealing with possible post-graduation or leaving-Canada matters.
  • I expect to complete...
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OseeI am going to renew my study permit; would you like to help me polish the following paragraph? Thanks a lot.

I expect completing my current degree requirements by 31 August 2008 at the latest, and attending the Convocation Ceremony of Osee's University usually scheduled at the end of November 2008. So I request
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Hi Feebs11, May I know the reason for replacing the "so" by "therefore"? Thanks a lot. Osee
Feebs11
OseeI am going to renew my study permit; would you like to help me polish the following paragraph? Thanks a lot.

I expect completing my current degree requirements by 31 August 2008 at the latest, and attendi
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The emphatic use of so is considered informal. Perfectly fine to use with your friends but in a formal letter such as this, it is better to use the more formal therefore or consequently.
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Thanks, new teacher Emotion: wink
JT2010The emphatic use of so is considered informal. Perfectly fine to use with y
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