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Coincidence Posted 14 years ago
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render sb sth
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could you tell me if this sentence is ok?
(it's part of a longer text)
Her diligent attitude to work and exceptional interpersonal skills render Ms Brown a model employee.
Thank you for your help.
I really appreciate it.
Kind regards.
could you tell me if this sentence is ok?
(it's part of a longer text)
Her diligent attitude to work and exceptional interpersonal skills render Ms Brown a model employee.
Thank you for your help.
I really appreciate it.
Kind regards.
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I'm not sure I'd agree that an attitude can be diligent. People can be diligent, but I'm not so sure about attitudes. I'd say "attitude toward work".
- I'm not sure I'd agree that an attitude can be diligent.
- People can be diligent, but I'm not so sure about attitudes.
- I'd say "attitude toward work".
- "render" seems OK.
- CJ
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I'm not sure I'd agree that an attitude can be diligent. People can be diligent, but I'm not so sure about attitudes.
I'd say "attitude toward work". "render" seems OK.
CJ
I'd say "attitude toward work". "render" seems OK.
CJ
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