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Synonym Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Remembering

"Its so nice of you both for remembering me. Even I missed u all. Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. Infact it was an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance class. Could not make it this time but next time for sure."

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I have underlined some problems: Its so nice of you both for remembering me. Eve n I missed u all. Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part .

  • I have underlined some problems: Its so nice of you both for remembering me.
  • Eve n I missed u all.
  • Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part .
  • Infact it was an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance class.
  • Could not make it this time but next time for sure.
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I have underlined some problems:

Its so nice of you both for remembering me. Even I missed u all. Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. Infact it was an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform danc
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Its so nice of you both for remembering me. Even I missed u all. Cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being a part. Infact it was an hectic day at my end Ist half being with family function and the 2nd half with my child who had to perform dance for the annual function of her dance clas
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Much better!

It is so nice of you both to remember me. I missed you all so much that I cannot find words to express the way I was feeling for not being there. In fact, it was a hectic day at my end, the first half being at a family function and the second half with my child, who had to perform a dance for the annual recital of her dance
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I really appreciate this practise of yours, to underline the problem areas and giving us a chance to try. It has improved my writing skills to much extent. Only with one drawback attimes when it is in urgent it takes too long to get the desired answer. I have the habbit of writing and reading blogs so this forum is very useful to me.

Thanks

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