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Remain vs Remains

should this sentance use remain or remains

Leading financial analysts, Fat Prophets remains bullish on the price of gold
  

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The sentence is faulty and nonsensical. The noun "analysts" is plural but the proper pronoun "Fat Prophets" to which it refers is singular. It also lacks proper punctuation.

  • The sentence is faulty and nonsensical.
  • The noun "analysts" is plural but the proper pronoun "Fat Prophets" to which it refers is singular.
  • It also lacks proper punctuation.
  • There should be a comma after "Prophets" Furthermore, if "Fat Prophets" is referring to a company instead of an individual, then describing such a company as "analysts" makes it ungrammatical and confusing.
  • In short, the sentence lacks clarity and is self contradictory.
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The sentence is faulty and nonsensical.
The noun "analysts" is plural but the proper pronoun "Fat Prophets" to which it refers is singular.

It also lacks proper punctuation.
There should be a comma after "Prophets"


Furthermore, if "Fat Prophets" is referring to a company instead of an individual, then describing such a company as "analysts" makes it ungrammatical
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I'm not sure I'm right, but I understand that sentence differently. To me, it makes sense (if you use 'remain').

"Leading financial analysts, Fat Prophets remain bullish on the price of gold."

In my opinion, the sentence means "Since they are financial analysts, Fat Prophets remain bullish on the price of gold."
In that case, no comma is needed after 'Prophets'.
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