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I enjoy singing. I often amuse myself by singing. When I take a shower at home, I would like to sing joyfully in a loud voice which
remains resonant in my whole house (or
spread over every corner in my house). My favorite singer is JJ Lin, who is a talented
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Singaporean singer, songwriter, record producer and actor based in Taiwan. I’m attracted by his handsome appearance and enchanting charm. I love his songs such as
Remember,
Let Go,
What's Wrong With You, and
Heart of Superman. His songs and performances are meaningful and comforting, giving vent to my feelings, having charms to soothe my soul, and voicing the aspirations of young people.