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Jc95132 Posted 20 years ago
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Regarding this position

Hi everyone, good evening?

Could anyone be so kind of as to proof my letter for me?

Dear Mr. Smith,

I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

After speaking with you, I do feel that I would be a perfect candidate for this position, offering adaptability that is needed for this position.

In addition to my enthusiasm for performing well, I would bring the technical and analytical skills necessary to get the jobs done. I am very interested in working for you and look forward to hearing from you once the final decisions are made regarding this position.

Best wishes to everyone Emotion: smile
  

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Fine, JC. I would suggest only 3 very minor changes: Dear Mr. Smith, I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company.

  • Fine, JC.
  • I would suggest only 3 very minor changes: Dear Mr.
  • Smith, I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company.
  • I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.
  • After speaking with you, I do feel that I would be a perfect candidate for this position, offering the adaptability that is needed for this position.
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Fine, JC. I would suggest only 3 very minor changes:

Dear Mr. Smith,

I wanted to say thank you again for taking the time to talk to me about the programmer's position in your company. I appreciate your time and consideration in interviewing me for this position.

After speaking with you, I do feel that I would be a perfect candidate for this position

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