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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

refusal email/letter

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00This is a form of exercise, not a real thing.02br
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00Dear Mr.Doe,02br
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00 I am sorry to inform you that we have decided not to accept you as our freshman. We carefully have considered all the material you submitted and felt that you haven't shown to us that you are ready to handle the rigor of the studies at our school. The decIsion was reached after a meeting between committee members. We have considered both your academic and non-academic records that we felt important in making the decision. 02br
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00If you wish to apply again after strenthening (consollidating??) your records in the future, we would be happy to consider you again.02br
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00We wish you the best in your future academic endeavors.02br
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00Best wishes,02br
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00No One 0-
  

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Doe,02br 02br 00 I am sorry to inform you that we have decided not to accept you as 01u 00our freshman02u 00. We01u 00 carefully have02u 00 considered all the material you submitted and01u 00 felt02u 00 that you 01u 00haven't02u 00 shown 01u 00to02u 00 us that you are ready to handle the 01u 00rigor 02u 00of 01u 00the studies02u 00 at our school. 02del 00 We have considered both your academic and non-academic records01del 00 that we felt important in making the decision02del 00.

  • Doe,02br 02br 00 I am sorry to inform you that we have decided not to accept you as 01u 00our freshman02u 00.
  • We01u 00 carefully have02u 00 considered all the material you submitted and01u 00 felt02u 00 that you 01u 00haven't02u 00 shown 01u 00to02u 00 us that you are ready to handle the 01u 00rigor 02u 00of 01u 00the studies02u 00 at our school.
  • 02del 00 We have considered both your academic and non-academic records01del 00 that we felt important in making the decision02del 00.
  • 02br 02br 00Best wishes,02br 02br 00No One 0-
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00Dear Mr.Doe,02br
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00 I am sorry to inform you that we have decided not to accept you as 01u00our freshman02u00. We01u00 carefully have02u00 considered all the material you submitted and01u00 f
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I am writing form Thailand.

I would like to know that in your country, a refusal letter will send to the applicant by email or mail?

Thank you
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I would expect it still to come by real mail-- unless the entire application process was via email.
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