Neither is very good, and the first one is incorrect.. The money I paid for the book was refunded, but it would have been better if they had shipped me a new one instead.
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PreciousJonesshouldn't it be had because it should all be one tense and past perfect desribes a past event of another past event.This business about the past perfect being before the past has nothing to do with this sentence.