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Panzerotto Posted 17 years ago
Refugees
Hi everyone! I'm an ESL student. I wrote this little poem for fun and I was wondering if someone can check it for grammar errors. Any help, comments or criticisms will be appreciated.
Refugees
In this land we brought
Our hearts and souls
And the hope to see a new sun
Raising above our frozen wake.
Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice
And warm up our body to a new born
Or give us strength to overcome the fear
And stand up to say: nevermore?
Refugees
In this land we brought
Our hearts and souls
And the hope to see a new sun
Raising above our frozen wake.
Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice
And warm up our body to a new born
Or give us strength to overcome the fear
And stand up to say: nevermore?
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In this land we brought Our hearts and souls And the hope of seeing a new sun Rising above our frozen wake. Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice And warm our bodies in a new birth Or give us strength to overcome the fear And stand up to say " N evermore"?
- In this land we brought Our hearts and souls And the hope of seeing a new sun Rising above our frozen wake.
- Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice And warm our bodies in a new birth Or give us strength to overcome the fear And stand up to say " N evermore"?
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In this land we brought
Our hearts and souls
And the hope of seeing a new sun
Rising above our frozen wake.
Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice
And warm our bodies in a new birth
Or give us strength to overcome the fear
And stand up to say "Nevermore"?
In this land we brought
Our hearts and souls
And the hope of seeing a new sun
Rising above our frozen wake.
Will it melt our memories’ ancient ice
And warm our bodies in a new birth
Or give us strength to overcome the fear
And stand up to say "Nevermore"?
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Thanks... some errors but I knew something was not right. I hope to improve! 
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