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Namsteven Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Refresh my mind

- Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me after long and hard working days. To refresh my mind, I usually spend some time on shopping, go to some stores to see something. Maybe I won't find a good bargain but that makes me happy.

- Do these sentences sound grammatical?

Thanks very much to Teachers,

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Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me after a long and hard days work. To refresh my mind, I usually spend some time on shopping, going to some stores to see something. Maybe I won't find a good bargain but that makes me happy.

— Dave Phillips

  • Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me after a long and hard days work.
  • To refresh my mind, I usually spend some time on shopping, going to some stores to see something.
  • Maybe I won't find a good bargain but that makes me happy.
  • I have corrected you grammar but rewording it would make it easier to read.
  • I suggest; Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me after a long hard day at work.
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Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me after a long and hard days work. To refresh my mind, I usually spend some time on shopping, going to some stores to see something. Maybe I won't find a good bargain but that makes me happy.

I have corrected you grammar but rewording it would make it easier to read. I suggest;

Relaxing and reducing stress are important for me af
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