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Catttt Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

reference of the sentence after the colon

1. Can I rewrite the highlighted sentence after the colon like this:

1. It is a view that tends to see history as a fixed condition, effectively suppressing undesirable, uncomfortable or ‘less important’ narratives, as opposed to acknowledging the patchwork of diverse, conflicting and changing points of departure at various moments in time. In other words this view tends to see history as ‘sum of ruptures, each marking the new, not a supposed continuum’, as Kahler puts it.

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2.It is a view that tends to see history as a fixed condition, effectively suppressing undesirable, uncomfortable or ‘less important’ narratives, as opposed to acknowledging the patchwork of diverse, conflicting and changing points of departure at various moments in time and opposed to seeing history as ‘sum of ruptures, each marking the new, not a supposed continuum’, as Kahler puts it.

Context:

Typically, then, a building such as the former Bohemian Court Chancellory, designed by the celebrated Fischer von Erlach in 1710, creates, with its ornate facade ‘the symbolic presence of an official Austrian architectural and civic patrimony, particularly through its invocation of a lost empire and the very name of its architect, the most beloved builder of the Austrian Baroque’. Now the Constitutional and Administrative Court in Vienna, the building also functioned as the seat of the Nazi administrative courts in Austria. The desire to preserve or, indeed, ‘hide behind’ a ‘facade of history’ is embodied, then, in the very built environment of the square. It is a view that tends to see history as a fixed condition, effectively suppressing undesirable, uncomfortable or ‘less important’ narratives, as opposed to acknowledging the patchwork of diverse, conflicting and changing points of departure at various moments in time: a ‘sum of ruptures, each marking the new, not a supposed continuum’, as Kahler puts it.
  

Top answer

Hi You need to keep 'a' in, from the quote ... "see history as 'a sum of ruptures' ... Your previous post, about Trafalgar Square, made me think of South Africa House.

  • Hi You need to keep 'a' in, from the quote ...
  • "see history as 'a sum of ruptures' ...
  • Your previous post, about Trafalgar Square, made me think of South Africa House.
  • That is a monolithic 1930s building that once represented the High Commission of apartheid South Africa.
  • It was the site of many London protests in the 1980s and 1990s.
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Hi

You need to keep 'a' in, from the quote ... "see history as 'a sum of ruptures' ...

Your previous post, about Trafalgar Square, made me think of South Africa House. That is a monolithic 1930s building that once represented the High Commission of apartheid South Africa. It was the site of many London protests in the 1980s and 1990s. I think that is what your author is gettin
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Why would you end a question sentence with a colon?
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red apple1. Can I rewrite the highlighted sentence after the colon like this: You can't end a sentence with a colon

1. It is a view that tends to see history as a fixed condition, effectively suppressing undesirable, uncomfortable or ‘less important’ narratives, as opposed to acknowledging the patchwork of diverse, conflicting and changing points of departure at v
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Hi

You wouldn't end a question sentence with a colon

But you might well use it to introduce a question into your sentence: would that be a strange thing to do?

Dave
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But you did not answer my question. Can I rewrite

" It is a view that tends to see history as a fixed condition, effectively suppressing undesirable, uncomfortable or ‘less important’ narratives, as opposed to acknowledging the patchwork of diverse, conflicting and changing points of departure at various moments in time: a ‘sum of ruptures, each mar

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