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Catttt Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary
reference of "in"
Does the highlighted "in" goes to the verb "concerned"? meaning " ...is more concerned with instilling a deeper political or ethical consciousness and in revealing the rich contradictions..."?
McGonigal’s paper differentiates importantly between two identifiable strains of flash mob: the one of site-specific ‘play’ is intent on ‘fun’, whilst the other of site-specific ‘performance’ is more concerned, so it is implied, with instilling a deeper political or ethical consciousness. Or, I would suggest, in revealing the rich contradictions of agonistic urban space.
McGonigal’s paper differentiates importantly between two identifiable strains of flash mob: the one of site-specific ‘play’ is intent on ‘fun’, whilst the other of site-specific ‘performance’ is more concerned, so it is implied, with instilling a deeper political or ethical consciousness. Or, I would suggest, in revealing the rich contradictions of agonistic urban space.
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Yes it does. " The writer uses "or" and your rewording should follow that usage.
- Yes it does.
- " The writer uses "or" and your rewording should follow that usage.
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Yes it does. However, I would not used "and." The writer uses "or" and your rewording should follow that usage.
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